Samara, I was inspired by your first submission and saw lots of possibilities. I hope you dont mind my presumtiousness with what you want from your work, but I couldnt help myself. I felt that your painting lacked some drama so I added contrast. I tried to avoid (painting over) your work as there is nothing really wrong with it. Anyway I'm not sure what the ethical protocol is with this because I haven't been doing it but I encourage members to assist one another with productive critique. Thanks again and welcome to our group.